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Chapter 8 - Patrick Lorne’s Debt

Patrick Lorne lived in a narrow brick duplex on a dead-end street in Yonkers, the kind of street where blinds moved when unfamiliar cars arrived.

By the time Evan’s convoy pulled up behind the police, neighbors were already watching from porches and upstairs windows. Rain had started again, thin and cold, darkening the pavement.

Evan tried to step out of the SUV.

Daniel blocked him.

“No.”

Evan stared at him.

“She may be inside. If you rush the house, you risk forcing him to panic.”

“My daughter is inside.”

“And that is why you have to stay here for ten seconds and let trained people enter first.”

Evan looked toward the house.

A child’s drawing was taped in the front window. A sun. A dog. A stick figure family.

The sight made him want to tear the door off its hinges.

The detective from the estate, Marisol Keene, approached with a tactical vest over her jacket. “We have officers covering the back. No visible movement. We called the number registered to Lorne, no answer.”

Leah sat in the SUV behind Evan, wrapped in a coat someone had brought her. Her face was gray with pain and fear, but she refused to remain at the estate.

“If Ellie is inside,” she had said, “she will hear my voice.”

No one had argued.

Detective Keene gave the signal.

Officers approached the door.

They knocked once. Announced themselves.

No response.

The battering ram hit.

The door gave way.

Evan stopped breathing.

Seconds passed.

Then a shout from inside.

“Clear!”

Another shout.

“No child!”

Leah cried out behind him.

Evan pushed past Daniel and entered the house.

It was small, cluttered, and stale-smelling. Dirty dishes in the sink. Men’s shoes by the couch. Mail scattered across a table.

No Ellie.

No Patrick.

But on the kitchen table sat a burner phone, a half-empty bottle of children’s apple juice, and Ellie’s other shoe.

Leah reached for it with shaking hands.

Detective Keene examined the phone without touching it. “He knew we were coming.”

Daniel was already checking exits. “Back door forced open from inside. Tire tracks in the alley.”

Evan looked at the apple juice.

“She was here.”

Keene nodded. “Recently.”

Leah’s breathing changed, fast and shallow.

Evan placed a hand at her back, careful of the injury. “Stay with me.”

“She was here, Evan.”

“We’re close.”

“Close doesn’t mean safe.”

He had no answer for that.

An officer entered from the hallway. “Detective, you need to see this.”

They moved into a small bedroom.

The walls were bare except for one framed photograph.

Patrick Lorne standing beside Rose Mercer at a charity race twelve years earlier.

Leah stared at it. “He knew Rose?”

Evan’s face darkened. “He worked for the estate.”

The officer opened a closet.

Inside, taped to the wall, were newspaper clippings.

Rose Mercer’s obituary.

Articles about Evan’s engagement to Sabrina.

A photo from the society pages showing Sabrina in diamonds, smiling beside Evan.

And beneath it, written in black marker:

She promised.

Daniel found a shoebox under the bed.

Inside were unpaid medical bills, collection notices, and handwritten payment records. The payments came every month from a shell company called Eastmere Consulting.

Evan recognized the name immediately.

Sabrina’s family used Eastmere for private retainers.

“She was paying him,” Daniel said.

“For what?” Keene asked.

Evan looked at Rose’s photo.

“For silence.”

A phone rang.

Everyone froze.

It was the burner phone on the kitchen table.

Detective Keene gestured for quiet and answered on speaker.

Patrick’s voice filled the room, ragged and panicked.

“You shouldn’t have gone there.”

Keene spoke calmly. “Patrick, this is Detective Marisol Keene. We want to make sure Ellie is safe.”

A pause.

Then Patrick laughed once, brokenly. “Safe. That’s what they all say.”

Evan stepped toward the phone.

Keene shook her head.

He ignored her.

“Patrick,” Evan said. “This is Evan Mercer.”

Silence.

Then breathing.

“You were supposed to stay blind,” Patrick said.

“Where is my daughter?”

“I didn’t hurt her.”

“Then bring her back.”

“You don’t understand. None of you understand what happens when Sabrina doesn’t get what she wants.”

“I’m learning.”

Patrick’s voice cracked. “She said she’d clear my debts. She said all I had to do was drive Mrs. Mercer that day. Just drive. I didn’t push her. I swear to God I didn’t push her.”

Evan’s blood chilled.

Leah covered her mouth.

Detective Keene’s eyes sharpened.

“What happened to Rose?” Evan asked.

Patrick began to cry.

“She knew. She knew about the baby. She knew about the test. Sabrina said the old woman was going to ruin everything. I was supposed to drive Mrs. Mercer to the bank. But Sabrina came out instead. They argued at the stairs. I heard yelling. Then I heard her fall.”

Evan gripped the table.

“Did Sabrina push my grandmother?”

Patrick sobbed. “I didn’t see it.”

“Where is Ellie?”

“I can’t say.”

Evan’s voice broke for the first time. “She is four years old.”

“I know.”

“She woke up asking for me.”

Patrick made a strangled sound.

Then, faintly in the background, a small voice cried, “Mommy?”

Leah screamed Ellie’s name.

The line went chaotic.

Patrick hissed, “Be quiet, sweetheart. Please.”

Evan leaned over the phone. “Patrick. Listen to me. Whatever Sabrina promised you, I can do more. Whatever she threatened, I can protect you from it. But if you let her hurt my daughter, there is no place on earth where my mercy can reach you.”

Patrick breathed hard.

“She said if I turned back, my son’s treatment stops.”

Keene gestured to her team to trace the call.

Evan lowered his voice. “I will pay for your son’s treatment. Today. For life. But you bring Ellie back.”

A long silence.

Then Patrick whispered, “There’s an old marina north of Tarrytown. Slip eighteen. She said someone would meet us.”

“Sabrina?”

“No.”

“Who?”

Patrick’s voice dropped lower.

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“Her father.”

The call ended.

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